Dear Barack Obama,
Good job winning the election. I have some ideas for you in your next four years as president. First, I think you should try to get gas prices low and then keep them low. Then, I think you should try to bring the stock numbers up. Next, you should try to win the war in Iraq. I think if you do these things and maintain the country you will be a good president.
Good job winning the election. I have some ideas for you in your next four years as president. First, I think you should try to get gas prices low and then keep them low. Then, I think you should try to bring the stock numbers up. Next, you should try to win the war in Iraq. I think if you do these things and maintain the country you will be a good president.
Sincerely,
Brett Kleeschulte

Good advice! I like that you used transition words like "first", "then" and "next".
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